By removing these, the main points stand out That's our goal
Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2025 6:14 am
This is how you talk to a 13-year-old. In fact, this is how you should talk to everyone all the time.
In the revised example, I removed abstract words like “chart” and “landscape” and represented a concept with a concrete example.
Grammatical simplifications like these don't make your writing worse. The complexity of your writing should come from the strength of its ideas, not from the wording of those ideas.
However, don’t remove key information when iran mobile database simplifying. For example, this is too simplified:
News Corp. wasn't having a great day.
This loses what news companies do poorly: simplify sentences without removing nuance.
One last example. Let's remove the abstract words and talk in plain language:
Bad paragraph - "Ignorance of corporate dynamics is a constant source of pain for a certain type of operator. Smart but inexperienced. I suggest you avoid this pain by understanding how others make decisions given the circumstances in which they are incentivized, and understanding the constraints within which they operate.
In the revised example, I removed abstract words like “chart” and “landscape” and represented a concept with a concrete example.
Grammatical simplifications like these don't make your writing worse. The complexity of your writing should come from the strength of its ideas, not from the wording of those ideas.
However, don’t remove key information when iran mobile database simplifying. For example, this is too simplified:
News Corp. wasn't having a great day.
This loses what news companies do poorly: simplify sentences without removing nuance.
One last example. Let's remove the abstract words and talk in plain language:
Bad paragraph - "Ignorance of corporate dynamics is a constant source of pain for a certain type of operator. Smart but inexperienced. I suggest you avoid this pain by understanding how others make decisions given the circumstances in which they are incentivized, and understanding the constraints within which they operate.